Complex Numbers

The Light

Back home, tired, but I have time to do a prompt from "Journalistic Intentions"  [18+]:

"If I learn one lesson,
count your blessings,
look to the rising sun,
and run run run."

And all I know from the prompt is that it's in the "Lyrics" category.

Is that first couplet supposed to rhyme? Because it doesn't. Not unless you're a Southerner and you force "blessings" to become "blessin" with maybe a secret "s" subvocalized at the end.

I get that songs don't always have meaningful lyrics. Even some songs I like. Hell, when Springsteen was starting out, he'd just sit on his bed with a guitar and a rhyming dictionary, then fit a bunch of other words into the rhythm. Well... mostly into the rhythm. He was much better at rhyme than rhythm.

Even so, he ended up with something resembling poetry:

Madman drummers bummers and Indians in the summer with a teenage diplomat
In the dumps with the mumps as the adolescent pumps his way into his hat
With a boulder on my shoulder feelin' kinda older I tripped the merry-go-round
With this very unpleasing sneezing and wheezing the calliope crashed to the ground

Internal rhymes abound in this, and there's even connections between the lines: "teenage" and "adolescent" in the first couplet; "merry-go-round" and "calliope" in the second.

Nonsense? Sure. But nonsense with some internal consistency.

Those lyrics are from "Blinded by the Light," which was the first song on his first released album, so it was what introduced Bruce to a weary world; the rest is... the opposite of silence. Even today, some people are under the misguided impression that the song was by Manfred Mann. Nothing against that version, but it was, indeed, a cover, and lacked Springsteen's frenetic energy. (Comments about the pronunciation of "cut loose like a deuce" therein will be summarily ignored.)

That doggerel in the prompt, though? Let's just say I hope that whatever song it's from has other redeeming qualities. A decent bass line, maybe, or at least a melody, one that doesn't all hover around one note like so many of today's songs do. Meaningful lyrics apart from those lines. Something.

The temptation to look up the lyrics is real; I might be ragging on a performer I actually like. Well, if so, so be it. Even Bruce had some dogs in the wolf pack. But I'm not going to do it. Not until I'm done here. And I'm not done.

"If I learn one lesson" -- Oh, surely some lyrical wisdom is to follow; let's keep listening...
"Count your blessings" -- Or maybe not; my mom used to use that line on Teen Me in a failed attempt to make him less angsty.
"Look to the rising sun" -- Mama always told me not to look into the sights of the sun.*
"And run, run, run" -- Um. Couldn't think of two other syllables besides those first two instances of "run?"

*Also a line from Blinded by the Light

Perhaps I simply still harbor resentment over having my really quite very real teen drama complaints (none of which I now remember or care about) minimized, so anything that includes the line "count your blessings" just triggers me. If so, oh well.

Also just to be clear, it doesn't matter to me how old or new a song is. Sure, a lot of new music sucks. A lot of old music sucked. You know why people don't often rag on the old music that sucked? Because people got tired of it, it went away, and they forgot all about it.

So. If I learn one lesson, use a chord progression; make the lyrics be fun, and don't stare at the sun.

...okay, so that's three lessons. Whatever.