I've never reviewed someone else's work, so you will forgive me if I make any obvious blunders.
I read your piece 3 times before I attempted to give an opinion. At first I thought it WAS the story of your life, but later decided that it could actually be very short stories about all kinds of people. In fact, I would guess that all of us know someone who is currently at that point in their life.
Does this then suggest that many, if not most of us could associate ourselves with one of your 'I ams' at some point in our lives...I know I can!
I really like the way you have put this together, it is thought provoking and instantly personal to its readers.
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