*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/stormmccoy
Review Requests: OFF
5 Public Reviews Given
5 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Only For A Night  
Review by S. C. Hendy
Rated: E | (3.5)
You have a very interesting premise here; I really like the plot. The punctuation needs a lot of work and it's mildly distracting, but that's something that just comes with learning and practice. It seems almost unfinished, in a way. Who was watching them? Why didn't her father say anything in the morning? Was Jenna just dreaming the whole thing? It feels like there's a lot that could be expanded on. But like I said, I enjoyed the plot. It could even be an entire book! (I bet it would sell really well.) I would love to see a final draft. Good work.
2
2
Review of Running Scared  
Review by S. C. Hendy
Rated: E | (3.5)
Aside from a few minor punctuation errors, I enjoyed it a lot. I was able to picture everything clearly, something that can be difficult for a writer to accomplish in so few words. It felt a little choppy in places, but that's understandable for challenges where you have to stay at a certain word count. I think this could turn out to be quite the excellent piece if it were expanded on.
2 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/stormmccoy