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Review of The River  
Review by FreeDom_Fighter*
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! I'm silenced and stunned by what I've just read. And it's awesome, I can't find any errors, you've completely blown me away. I think it's because when I was reading your poem it's almost like reliving a sacred ritual I've practiced for years. I've never heard it described like that before. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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Review of Lost  
Review by FreeDom_Fighter*
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You have great insight in what you've written. Not everyone can show themselves like that and get others to understand by the usage of words. The thing I would suggest is your first few lines should flow a little better. You have a great rhyme scheme and your imagery is amazing. But watch out for your syllables you can prevent by keeping a thesaurus. It may sound strange but it has helped me out a lot. Keep up the good work!
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