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Review of Stubbed  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey,
Before I review I just would like to say that everything I say is just my opinion and what I think, and it’s intended to help you.

*Bullet* Constructive Comments
This is a very well written poem about feelings and emotion. You did a good job at capturing it, very well done.


Write on *Idea* and Season’s Greetings,
~Soul Writer *Smile*

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Review of Chocolate  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey,
Before I review I just would like to say that everything I say is just my
opinion and what I think, and it's intended to help you.


*Bullet* Comments

This is a very well planned article with tons of information. This was very interesting and educational. And yes, chocolate is a gift from the gods
*Bigsmile*



Write on!*Idea* and MARRY CHRISTMAS! *Smile*

~Soul Writer


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Review of For Joey  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey,
Before I review I just would like to say that everything I say is just my opinion and what I think, and it’s intended to help you.

*Bullet* Constructive Comments
this is a very nice poem. You said a lot in this poem and that is a good thing. However the first thing I notice was the look of it. The first paragraph it has longer sentences than the second. And the second is longer than the first. I think putting it into three parts instead of two could fix that problem. But still I like it
*Smile*

Write on *Idea* and Season’s Greetings
~Soul Writer *Heart*

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Review of Amy  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey,
Before I review I just would like to say that everything I say is just my opinion and what I think, and it’s intended to help you.

*Bullet* Comments

This story is so beautiful and sad at the same time. The story was very well written, with good characters. I was really feeling for Amy as I read along.

This was a very well written story. *Smile*

Write On! *Idea* and Season’s Greetings *Bigsmile*
~Soul Writer *Heart*

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Review of Green Eyes  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey,
Before I review I just would like to say that everything I say is just my opinion and what I think, and it’s intended to help you.

*Bullet* Comments
This story was really amazing, the first thing I said when I was finish this was”whoa!” This is a very well written story and I didn’t notice any grammar or spelling errors.

I like that fact that is was a love story but not your normal love story, and I like that, why follow the norm? *Bigsmile*


Write on!*Idea* and Season’s Greetings *Smile*
~Soul Writer

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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hey,
Before I review I just would like to say that everything I say is just my opinion and what I think, and it’s intended to help you.

*Bullet* What I like
What I really like is Sheila. I like the fact that she is a hard working woman and the fact that she is not the most tone and cut female on earth. A lot of people go for the pretty petite female (not saying that’s bad) but you went for the pretty full figure woman and that’s good.

*Bullet* And some Constructive Comments
One thing I didn’t like was how you described Lyrell. In the 4th paragraph you describe him as being baldheaded but in the last paragraph you describe him having cornrolls. One think I think that could help that is if you do a character profile. A character profile is basically a bio of your character and with it you even better understand your characters. With a character profile you basically fill out there name, age, height, weight, Birthplace, and things like that.

But all and all I liked it *Smile*
Write on *Idea*
~Soul Writer

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