Hi!
Love love love this a lot. I am proud to see how you used this platform to garner awareness on real time issues. Just one detail I had a slight issue with. This is not a war but a genocide. Ethnic cleansing of a group that cannot defend themselves with the strongest army in the world.
Again, you did a wonderful job, but these little details become major issues.
Hope you can keep on writing and get your work published!
First of all, I think what you are doing is super cool. Starting a novel is an amazing amazing accomplishment. I like the writing style where it feels personal and close to home and a little bit all over the place dictating the narrator's state of mind. I would live if it had a little more direction and a little more narration in the story itself but loving this! Keep it up and I hope to see you published one day!
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