Hey Bugzy! Excellent creation of an Alpha poem! All words worked perfectly, especially the difficult J,Q,and V words. The subject was fun and made me hungry. I read your B and D lines a couple times where you used "and" instead of a comma and it actually gives it a fun read and makes the lines jump. Excellent work with this very difficult form of poetry!
Sam
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Hey Molly! Excellent work in writing your Alpha Poem! All lines flow perfectly and your use of the difficult J,Q,and V letters were brilliant. The way you desciribed the thought process of trying to come up with a subject for your poem was very enjoyable and clever. Great Job!
Sam
Hey Wenston, This is some powerful poetry that I'm sure brings back many memories to a lot of Vets. This is a story that has many familiar rings to it told to me by many friends who were there. A friend of mine was a tunnel rat and your words rang up many stories he has told me through the years, he is still not a 100 percent and nobody could ever blame him even if he was only 20 percent. He didn't choose this, he was chosen for it and how he ever survived is beyond me. Thanks for remembering and don't ever forget.
Sam
Hey Meg! Your Alpha poem is absolutely amazing! I love the way you describe your Australian homeland in this poem and I wish I could get on a plane and go there right now! I never knew you had so many odd creatures. I would really like to se a picture of The Tasmanian Tiger, it’s too bad they are no longer in existence. What a great picture you have painted through words, especially for such a difficult form and you made it flow perfectly. Great Job Meg, I really enjoyed this!!!
Sam
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Kiya! This is incredibly brilliant! Your poem just flows from beginning to end which is very difficult to do, I know I struggled with it. You are making this look way too easy! I am really impressed! Great Job!
Sam
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Hey Terry,
I really like your poetry, it really flows well and is very good with the imagery. As a past Florida native I really liked the pelican and Manitee poems.
Rainforest symphony was very creative, and dinosaurs was short but good. Great job and keep on writing!
Sam
Hey Kurt, Incredible funny tale! The visual imagery in fantastic! I haven't had this much fun since Super Bowl XL and the magnetic, almost pulsating 50 yard line just outside my grasp, Along with the 40 policemen with large sticks and guns who stand to protect it. Very funny and really enjoyable read.
Sam
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