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Review of Laying So Close  
Review by Charlie Polin
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
I feel that you are attempting to make a point with this poem, but honestly what it is alludes me. Is it simply a combination of enuendoes thrown together? Are you trying to convey your desire for interiors? If it is an attempt at a comedic poem, any sense of humor is lost in the jumble of things.
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