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Review by Peter the Great
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
This series has a serious case of everyone wanting to offer suggestions, but no one wanting to move on them. The result? massive list after massive list, each one as pointless and uninteresting as the last. At this point, unless there was a mass volunteering of creativity, there's no way anyone could slog through those choices to get to any of the story marrow the reader is looking for.

I condemn this piece, and may God have mercy on its over-detailed and underdeveloped soul.
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