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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is a good poem for what you have put in it.
But, I feel it could use more description of the pain and torture the innocent of a million people were put through.
Also maybe add more about the other people who were forced to go into concentration camps due to their blood line. I feel this would have stronger emotions and meaning to people if more was added. More people would be able to connect on a personal level. With your poem.



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