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Review of Little Xavier  
Review by Norris
Rated: E | (4.0)
This Story. is nice...
the way you wrote about how Max was bored and all..i am almost felt it.
but somehow the part about the girl taking him away with her made me uneasy...
good work you did...keep on writing ^_^
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Review of Dry Eyes  
Review by Norris
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
wet as sand and warm as ice. its a good to way to tell us how dry and how cold they are.
its a nice (sad pome)
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Review by Norris
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
it is a nice and instresting to read. the confusion that's been made about Nari is its only fault...

keep it goingT
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