Good evening! I came across your poem 'If Trees Are Gone' from the Read and Review function and this is definitely a beautiful poem.
It's raining right now, and the sound of rain pelting on roofs and on trees are different indeed. I agree with the sentiments shared in the poem, plus it's a good read to raise awareness on the importance of trees. Thank you for your poem.
Good evening! 'The Story of Animalize' is a very interesting take on inspiration. Thank you for sharing your experience.
I believe having an open mind is key to catching inspiration. I myself also write mostly from what I can hear and see. Also, may I know where I can read this story? It sounds like an interesting read.(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Good evening!
I came across your work in the "Please Review" section.
It looks like the MC is living under an oppressive state. The clues and tone set by the letter helps solidify the severity of the punishment.
Although, I was caught off guard when the letter called the MC a liar. It gives the image that MC is a freedom fighter? I might be wrong. It's just a suggestion, maybe using a formal way of calling them a liar would be better. Eg. Spreading rumours or conjuring false claims.
Overall, it's an interesting read! Good work and keep writing.
Good evening!
I feel blessed to read your poem 'A Song for No One' that really captures the essence of the name. I resonated with the feeling despite not being in a romantic relationship before.
It has a note of nostalgia and reminiscence but not too sad. Gah I love it. Also, I reread it a few more times and I don't think there are any parts to change.
Furthermore, I think if you made a separate continuation poem, that would be nice. Maybe a different vibe for that one. That's it, it's wonderful.
Good evening!
I had the pleasure of reading your story 'Descendents of Bast' and it was definitely entertaining.
It took me 'purrfect' to understand he was a cat. I do wonder what happened to Joey?
(Hopefully nothing 'cat'astrophic)
It wasn't explained and I'm left to wonder if it's an element of mystery for your story.
Overall, it was humourous and engaging. Plus, the ending was purrfect.
Hi! This was a delightful read. Especially some parts that rhymed a bit. Liked that the vibe is half serious and half comedy and the MC's personality definitely helped! Nice work ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧
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