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Review by Soy Criada
Rated: E | (3.5)
This poem has a nice flow. As said by others the who'er would sound better if written" who were.". I am not too good at reviewing but what does this purple means.? kind of sound good with the repitition and all that but I just do not get the sense of it.
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Review of Majesty  
Review by Soy Criada
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like the first line the second I can relate to too the 7th-9th lines I cannot connect
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