I really enjoyed this. The descriptions made me really feel what the sneaker was feeling. You described the people who wore him well. All in all a delightful original piece of writing.
I really enjoyed this. I would love to go to anywhere in Europe and I would love to go to a writer's workshop. I'm stuck in snowy Oklahoma waiting for another substitute teacher call. I daydream of places like Venice and Paris. Thanks for the juicy details about hangovers and too much carbs and writer's block.
My first memory is a record my father sent me from Korea wishing me a happy holiday. Your story brought tears to my eyes. Have a happy holiday and may God bless. I really appreciate the effort you guys make to keep us free to have places like writing.com
I really like this because you really feel like Angel is writing this. I would like to read more about Angel. I think you could develop this story into a really nice children's story.
I think this is a great story. I found Christ the day my first son was born. He was so special and I was so grateful that he was healthy that I decided then and there that the Power that gave him to me was special and worthy of all my love and time. I have gone to many churches since then and try to find time to pray with Christ every day. I agree with UW that Christ is the best Friend we can have. He is there when nobody else is. I would like to read more by uw about his wal with Christ.
This was a very readable story. I loved the beginning. I could beleive the character: I felt I knew him. I could understand his frustration. I enjoyed the search he made for his love. The ending was a bit strange, but since I lvoe animals I could totally understand it. All told, a very enjoyable story.
i love this story. It is really inspirational. i want to see more writing from you. More details about your life. You've been through a lot. I want to learn more
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/monajohnson
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.18 seconds at 12:39pm on Sep 19, 2024 via server web1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
