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Review of Last Time  
Review by Marivic
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I would like to have known the "why" of this poem; why will [you] "smile once again"? I feel it was all implied in the ellipses (well-used!) - which perhaps was your intent, but the rest is presented so strongly that the "gap" is emphasized.

Very nice - thanks for sharing!

Marivic
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