I really like it. Its very catchy, and the images are vivid. I sadly must say I have never actually heard the actual song, but i can imagine how it sounds through your parody-which says alot about how well it was constructed. I hope to read more of your work, and hopefully you can review some more of mine when you have time-i would greatly appreciate it. :)
Sincerely,
Kierran
I think the intro is very solid, but you need to check back over your spelling just a little bit.It's interesting to find out you're on deviant art-i have a profile as well.look up kierran/kierran 5-something like that. Like i said though, solid intro, tweak the spelling & it will be great.
Kierran
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