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Review by kichiki
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hallo,

Your message is clear. I enjoyed your poem overall; however, you may want to correct the spelling errors in your work so to not deviate from the point of the poem. I like you use of protraying Earth as a balencer, using the duel malviolence and beneviolence of nature. Might I suggest a little detail as what we are doing to nature to make the poem hit home, not distent Items like factories, but everyday things descibed in a poetic manner? Thanks for the wonderful read.

May the muse be with you, Clay
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Review of My Muse  
Review by kichiki
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Howdy,

This is simply beautiful. The very exhilaration expirenced (or pain of the intangable) that inspires art, this muse, that makes the emotion come alive on paper is simply beautiful. And while I don't know if your dreams inspire art like this, muse is always with us. Like a soul, it may never be touched, but it shall always be there. Keep regathering these moments of excitiment in your work.

Best of luck, kichiki (aka Clay)
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Review of LIES  
Review by kichiki
Rated: E | (3.0)
I enjoy twisting the truth as the "accusing finger" has no true terra firma to cast a hateful look. And you are right to point out the needless quarrel between the truth and lies. Twist the truth with the lies' "fingers" and do you not have a strange bond. Keep writing to confound the mind. May the Muse be with you.
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