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Review of Starlet Brace  
Review by JazeCraze
Rated: E | (4.5)
That's a real cute story. I liked it alot! Because it was cute, and funny.

I found one error that I think you might want to check out: "Do you of any one who would have wanted your brother dead?”(Know instead of of)

I got stuck on that one. It was great!*Smile* It had direction, and you focused! Oh, and I like your connection with people!

But the punch was bad! *Laugh*
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Review of Ethan  
Review by JazeCraze
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
So you telling me Ethan wasn't gay... How melancholy... There were some errors but I have judge this story on Creativity okay... Nice going hope you write more...
JazeCraze
P.s. Can you r&r my story? It's called Entering the Darkness or if you like read Residing into Light..
Thanks in advance
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