too many one liners. their authors are worthless sacks of sad meat that do not contribute to story whatsoever. cluttered beyound reason and needs to be weeded out like freaking yesterday.
yeet the hell out of one word chapters. those pesky authors that "wrote" them are pre-schoolar kids which should've had their entire hands cut off. they do nothing but clutter the s*** which this story turned out to be. the only good branch here is chrysalis's arc, that's all that's good here. every other chapter is either Written By Mentally Difficient Translator Using ESL Stupid Bastards or being one-liner.
Yeah, not a single good thing can be said about these chapters you pulled out of ass. Cause, either this is a very long premise or you simply choice to self promote here in a very lazy manner. Also, this style is the most absolute shit. It resembles some play's script but the author must've been either hit in the head up to the opposite side of their skull or been "alternatively" gifted from the very start. The choice that is "" given "" here is so insignificant that the only reason to split these chaps was just to get published items numbers higher.
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