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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well this is my first review so I'm wandering into unknown territory, but I enjoyed your chapter enough to try it ^^.

First of all, I liked your writing style. It seems very vivid and descriptive but not with overflowing depictions which can get a little on the heavy side. It made me want to read on. I had a little trouble navigating through the huge paragraphs, but that just might be me not being used to it yet.

I found the plot interesting, as well as the world it is set in, even though not much is said about it. I find that a little captivating, so I'm curious now. I would like to read the next chapter, and maybe review it if I get the chance to ^^

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