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This was beautiful to read. it flows nicely, and the rhythm and rhymes make it easy to read.... well done..:)

I've always associated "Blue" with sadness.
and "Green" with envy.

"I'm so sick of missing you
shades of green are all I see
wheres the blue you gave to me?"...

This part is interesting to me. "Blue" as love, or maybe lost love causing a feeling of envy for whoever is getting the love now....Or something like that..:)

I hope I didn't misinterpret your work.

anyway, it makes you think.. Well done!

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#4759441

Review of Summertime

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

well done, it was a pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing.

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#4759439

Review of Blessings and Praise

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Well done, I enjoyed reading this one.

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#4759438

Review of The Soda

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This was a pleasure to read. It flows nicely.

Well done! :)

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#4759436

Review of You Start Dying Slowly

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Well written, and a pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Write on. :)

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#4758998

Review of St. Patrick's Day Acrostic

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

"Kilts may be seen. Don't take a peek! Behave!"

:).. Love this part, it made me laugh.. :)

Well done, it was a pleasure to read.

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#4758996

Review of All the Time

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Amen.

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#4758995

Review of The Caring Soul

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A beautiful story, I have no doubt that no matter what this world throws at us, the hearts and souls of good people will see us through with love for our neighbors and hope for the future.

Thanks for sharing this story..:)

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#4758674

Review of I Love The Rain

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Well written, It flows nicely, and was a pleasure to read.

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#4758334

Review of Real Fool

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Well done sir, I like it.

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#4758333

Review of The Moment

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Realcav,This was a well written, and insightful description of an oh so familiar filling we have all experienced at some point in our lives.

Well done sir, well done.

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#4758322

Review of My Room With A View

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hello Neighbor, That was beautiful to read.

I have lived in the country and the city, and I will pick the county every time.

I want to thank you for welcoming me to this community with your kind reviews of my poems.

So here is a "sweet hello" from me to you.
I wish you the best in all that you do.
May your soul stay happy and your heart stay true.
And may you always have time to enjoy the view.