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Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dang! This is a very chilling story, very good job of setting the mood and dragging me into the slowly mounting terror of the unknown in the basement.
Color me impressed, and this is going into my favorites
Great use of vocabulary
Thanks for sharing this incredible story
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Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: E | (5.0)
So true, I abhor the garbage on the tv nowadays.
So well put, and I'm all about TOS myself, and Kotter, WKRP, and my all time fave - Andy Griffith

Thanks for sharing this lament to days gone by
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Review of Ode to a city  
Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Haunting, I love it

Personally, i"d only change one thing, on the first line of text, I would put Shadows at the starts of the sentence, to read" Shadows in the night" to me it just flows easier that way, but that's just my preference,

A very nice piece, thanks for sharing!
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Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: E | (4.5)
Awesome idea for a story, I like it!
Only reason I didn't give it a 5 was due to some grammar errors and other minor things that could easily be fixed.

At any rate, thanks so much for sharing this very good idea!!
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Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Just beautiful, I'm gonna leave it short and sweet.

Into the favorites it goes
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Review of Grandpa, Tell Me  
Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is incredible, and so well done!!
Brilliant the way you make the songs an actual part of the conversation
What exactly is written with the prompt mean?

Again, awesome job
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Review of Five Bucks  
Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was awesome! Great job of melting through different perspectives
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Review of outback  
Review by GrisYeti75
Rated: E | (5.0)
Phenominal! All I could say when I finished was WOW! This is so well constructed. Awesome job, I have no critiques, just praise.
Thanks for sharing
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