Wow, you obviously know what your doing, I'm not sure where to start, everything is so good. I love the give and take of your characters and they are all very believable. Rathiel's characterization was my favorite and very believable. The ebb and flow of the way you have written this prologue moved the story forward in a very comfortable but deliberate way.
I love authors who write this way, my favorite type of reading.
Ah a cry for help. I like your poem I really do, I think there are a lot of people out there of like mind. I can't really say I'm one of them my belief system is very different. If you would like a different perspective check out Item #1323615. Keep up the good work ;)
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