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Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
never mind, i think i understand the title of your other story a bit better now. your writing is interesting to read, though i suggest some proofreading and editing, as some parts get a bit confusing, not in concept, but in wording.
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Review of the beginning  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (3.5)
certainly a good read, though i must admit the title seems kind of mismatched or slapped on.
btw, i never have a use for the points, so take em
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Review of Immortal World  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
very good, it had a nice flow to it and it's well written. good job! *thumbs up*
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Review of Mary-Ann  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Although I predicted most of the ending after the first couple paragraphs, I must say this Is a great story. I wouldn't worry, as it appears to be overwhelmingly difficult to write a mirror horror story you can't predict to some degree
All in all, good job, very creative and well written.
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very touching, although I feel the 18+ rating is unnecessary.
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Review of Pink Cranes  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm no good with reviews, just saying I liled it, good work :)
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Review of He Gets My Vote!  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
He's got my vote any time :)
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Review of Tenari  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you, random new word person! Lpl
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Review of Day 4-6  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well written. Normally my attention span doesn't hold for that long of a random read, but it was very interesting
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Review of Beginning.  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very cool. And here, randomly selected writer, have my gift points
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Review of "Sweet November"  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice poem :) (you can have my points, I never use them)
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dang. I like religion based work that takes a twist; and what you say couldn't be put better.
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Review of Floridian Evil  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I live in a town that runs off of tourism; I feel your pain man.
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Review of THIS CROSSROAD!  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Very nice spin on "the rode less traveled." Personally? I'd go right.
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Review of The Thunderbird  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Beautifully writtin.
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lisa, I've never heard it put better.
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Review of Orange  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.5)
For a moment, all I could think was "is he the head of Nickelodian?" Great twist, SoCalScribe
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice perspective on life, i've never heard it put quite like that.
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Review of Old Lady  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice, even funnier because i know an old lady like that. Welcome to the site!
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Review of Blessing  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well said, but considering this piece's short size, I don't think this is quite the right place to post it. Still, well done. I reccomend you make a list of things like this that you believe. Welcome to the site!
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Review of Destruction  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it and the messedges in it. Well done, welcome to the site, and happy new year!
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well hello, welcome to the community cyndydalton! Good, meaningful poem, the only thing to point put is the title, where you wrote "og" instead of "of". Happy new-years!
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Review by Jesniha
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
ZAmazing and well written. Excellent metaphor on its own, but would love to read more of this. Good job! And, on another note, I have no use for gift points, so take them
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Review of Snow  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice. I was a little confused by the wording at times, but I wouldn't change it regardless. Well done! And happy holidays, I have little use for gift points, so here's a random late christmas gift
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Review of The Moon  
Review by Jesniha
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great twist. My only correction is that you wrote "shoulder to should" Write on, and happy holidays
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