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Review of Going Away  
Review by I.M. Kingfisher
Rated: E | (5.0)
Mirage Moon,

Overall, a short but poignant piece! The tone is solemn and the nameless characters create a sense of mystery. I especially like the part, "She [...] shrugs farther into the shawl around her shoulders, hoping to ward off the chill- and the stale smell of sickness- in the air." Great imagery, indeed!

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