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Review by Midnight*heart
Rated: E | (4.0)
This peom is on the right track change a few words around some do not make sense at all. reread your peom and see how you can change it. I thought the ending was wonderful a great way to leave a reader. I really felt the impact of the grave. It was so bueatiful I almost began to cry.
keep up the great work!!
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