How wonderful a piece this was. It touches me especially because the woman I have in my life now does exactly what you say; inspires me to better myself. She only requires my love and has been happy from that since we've been together, in fact we plan to be married! How beautiful a piece.
I hope to read more from you. Please, keep writing!
This connected with me. It expresses things I've been trying to get across to fellow Americans who will have a say in the upcoming election. This is a smart, inspirational piece which I believe holds a message of high importance.
I think this may be my favorite piece I've read through so far on this website. You took your prompt and ran with it. The ability to do such a thing, I feel, is the mark of a true artist . I've just reviewed another of your pieces a few moments ago and I must say I'm fast becoming a fan. I don't have much else to say I suppose as I find it hard to find any fault in your work whether that is grammatical or otherwise.
For me this was an excellent find. I haven't read any of the other parts of this particular poem composed story but, this part inspired me to do so and I plan on it as soon as possible. The language is very interesting and hops along at an appropriate and enjoyable meter.
This was such an interesting read albeit it slightly confusing. I had to read it through a few times to grasp the meaning and to truly appreciate it fully. The language used is haunting and given the background of the piece it increases immeasurably in that sense. I'm not really sure if I'd like to read more from this because of the fact that it is a private entry of one who has passed. I'd like to try however.
I won't pretend my review of this isn't horribly biased considering I'm an American college student and hate the world George W. Bush has helped to leave for me and the people we all share the world with. I enjoyed this piece because it hit everything on the head. Great job
Hello! I really enjoyed reading this parody. As an avid Eagles fan I really appreciate the way your lyrics kept in time with the music in my head. Hope to read more from you.
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