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Review of Imagine  
Review by chankleta
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's different and very smooth I liked a lot!!!
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Review of The Voice  
Review by chankleta
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it a lot
it reminded me of my best friend and you think what would happen if he or she did die?
keep up the writing?
-Chankleta
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Review of To Be Pure Again  
Review by chankleta
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful and if it's true then don't think about the rejects of life that did that to you
think about the success in life that has or will come and you are dreaming; your writing right so that is a dream that probably you have don't let any impediment stand in your way and I know its not your fault that happened to you but make sure that you show no emotion to their disgusting ways for you are beautiful no matter what and whoever tries to bring you down make sure you say suck it and get on with your life
love the writing keep it up!!!


-Chankleta
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Review of Despair  
Review by chankleta
Rated: E | (4.5)
woah that piece was beautiful I liked it a bunch maybe you should consider making it longer, there's nothing wrong with it now but if it was a little longer then you will have people crying
SOME IDEAS:
"Life is so unfair
The rich get richer and the poor (get) disgraced
(People get killed because of a different race) THEN
Is religion the answer?"
Just to Try to make it longer maybe you should speak more about religion
and how it has affected you in any kind of way
Keep up the writing!!!!
-Chankleta
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Review by chankleta
Rated: E | (4.0)
The beginning was a little weak but as you went through it got stronger but as a whole the poem was interesting, keep up the writing
-Chankleta
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