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Review by Chaim Tal
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem "Mein Tatte in Himmel, incline your ear" resonates deeply with its earnest plea and poignant portrayal of faith and anguish. It vividly conveys the agony of feeling unheard and the profound impact of betrayal on your world. Images of silent cries piercing through layers of sorrow speak to your pain and longing for comfort.

The invocation of the Almighty, Blessed is He, adds spiritual depth, reflecting your search for meaning and connection amidst adversity. The references to "Mein Tatte in Himmel" evoke a sincere cry to a higher power for understanding and comfort, emphasizing your unwavering faith even in moments of despair.

Through your poem, you invite readers to empathize with your struggles and reflect on universal themes of resilience and spiritual endurance. It serves as a powerful reminder of the healing power of faith and the importance of seeking guidance and strength in difficult times.

By sharing your lament recorded in the poem, you turn to the Almighty for comfort. Your attempt at vulnerability and finding an answer in heaven is truly profound.

Remember - Heaven's gates are not always open for prayer, but the "Gate of Tears" is perpetually open; such prayers are always accepted.


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