All-in-all, this is a first-rate story. There's some bad language, but you warn us ahead of time, which I appreciate. You got a number of laughs out of me! Keep up the writing and let me know when you get published!
This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
Aww... it's the end. Two typos, the only ones in the story. Thanks for the great read.
Geno Walked down the street a bit, and found the bus station. (Geno walked down the street...)
Geno glanced at the map for a moment, and then quietly ran down the hallway to the left, passing several unmarked, steel doors. (...passing several unmarked steel doors.)
This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
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