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Review of A SINCERE FRIEND  
Review by BPL
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like that the 3 line of every paragraph does not rhyme .
To many people think rhyming is the sole purpose of a poem .
It flows nicely .
It is easy to read .
It is easy to understand what you are saying .
I can feel your heart and your love for others .
I look forward to reading more from you !
Great job !
Well done !!
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Review of Tasting Memories  
Review by BPL
Rated: E | (4.5)
The picture sets a great image to go with the poem . It is well written and i found no mistakes. God job!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Fog  
Review by BPL
Rated: E | (5.0)
She didn’t know (T)hat this meant or why no one would admit they saw it, too.Misses a letter there.
It jumps from smooth reading to shock . As a horror that is great . I would like more detail about the fog or smoke before the scare. I understand this is a young girl and she wont give details about her surrounding, but a a writer i would like more. Over all if could give this a 10 I would!!!Good job good work
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Review by BPL
Rated: E | (4.0)
Breath taking !! the words flowed easy together . Well done
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