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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another important poem by the poet.
It is a military poem titled "Glorious Nation", which is a tribute to pride and service for the nation to build our society better. This poem highlights the importance of courage, dedication, and sacrifice in our military service. The poem also emphasizes the values of freedom, liberty, and security, that are protected by them with caution. The national interest gets priority. Overall,A military can live for the same national interest. Ultimately, the poem inspires us to love the country and build patriotism like the soldiers. This is the recepy to create the best country.
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Review of The Mountain  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The subject of this tiny poem is truly fantastic. The presentation is extremely good. It fulfils all the characteristics of the traditional Japanese Haiku except one: that's the prime condition. What is that condition? It is the main purpose of a Haiku. What is that? It should draw an image of nature, the beauty of mother nature.
Forgotten sacred mountain home, endure for long. If we analyse this, we may observe that there is an image, but this is an image of the human mind. Our real home is heaven, where God lives. We came to this planet to serve the purpose of God. But we feel a void in our minds. We're always waiting to meet him. The image of that thought has been drawn here nicely. That form of poetry is known as Senryu, not Haiku. It also originates from Japan.
The quality of writing is good.
Keep writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bocephus was waiting for his masters. He felt himself overlooked and worthless. He heard a small voice that was offering to be his owner, and he accepted that. Despite many doubts. After several months of hard work, he clung on to hope. In a vision, Bocephus saw himself serving for the king, which renewed his faith in the unknown voice.
Jesus sent disciples to bring Bocephus to Him. The disciples found him, untied him, and took him to Jesus. People questioned them, but they explained that the Lord needed him. Bocephus was excited to be part of something important, despite his past as a wild foal. The disciples taught him about his new owner, the King, and how he was loved and chosen. Bocephus reached the maturity needed for Jesus to ride on him into Jerusalem.
Bocephus' journey with Jesus was filled with pride and gratitude. As they entered Jerusalem, the crowds worshipped Jesus, and Bocephus felt honoured to carry him. The praise for Jesus was powerful, and Bocephus smiled, grateful to have waited for this moment to serve his King among the adoring multitudes.
Jesus, the Lord of the entire world, undoubtedly, is the main character. But we must remember the importance of Bocephus's role. He is the medium by which Jesus established his kindness again.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is truly a superb short story by the writer. It's full of suspense. But it is story for adult readers.
David Welton woke but couldn't recognise that unknown room. Suddenly felt that he was in a woman's body named Julie. He became confused and began panicking. He encountered a man who explained that Julie had the ability to switch bodies for a day. Despite initial anger, David settled into his new reality and spent the day playing poker, enjoying fine wines, and watching movies. The next thing he knew, he was back in his own body, with his debts miraculously paid off. Julie's mysterious actions changed his life for the better, leaving him in awe of the experience on Cheval Island off the coast of Madagascar.
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Review of Moments of Gold  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The teller was a wealthy man and curious about everything. That attitude helped him to discover another hidden treasure in 2008 during a visit from his daughter Emily and granddaughters Arianna and Kailey. Emily and another daughter, Janette, took Kailey shopping, leaving him to babysit Arianna and Kaleb, Janette's son and my only grandson at the time. Despite the fact that they didn't spend much time together, they both tried to make a strong connection with each other. During their playtime, it was prominent.That experience taught him a valuable lesson. Simplicity and joy of childhood, where the heart is involved, are keys to making a connection. Two infants performed it successfully. Will not we follow them?It is a very important nonfiction item that should be followed.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How can an ideal kingdom build? That answer is searching here. That is inbuilt there in your heart.

In a kingdom reminiscent of our own, a prince is set to rule who realises that power requires more than mere wealth. Life, like the court, offers both mockery and guidance, forcing him to distinguish truth from deception. As he faces challenges and overcomes obstacles, he learns that true dominance comes from within. The throne is but a symbol; his character is the true measure of his reign. As he begins his noble journey, he seeks wisdom and virtue, knowing that his actions will define his legacy. In the grand symphony of life, he can maintain duty, honour, and generosity, for a king is crowned by deeds, not jewels. It is the timeless story of a prince who wants to rule not just a kingdom but himself.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another important poem that is written by the poet. It's a crucial poem for building our society. We often see that we become defocused. We shouldn't lose our patience. We witnessed that type of experience on several occasions.We should take lessons from the previous takes and prepare ourselves to achieve the target. This time, we'll be successful. Our philosophy and culture support this.
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Review of Preparations  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This adventure fiction becomes too exciting.
Skrie encountered a woman who was searching for her lost target and blaming Skrie for her intervention. The group prepared for their journey to Irewick which might be more exciting! We don't know. Skrie disguised herself to learn more about a bounty hunter named Marko who was recruiting. Marko shared information about a bounty from Freyglen province involving a horc, bandits, and the Black Finger clan. Skrie thanked him and left to continue preparing for their trip. The next day, they finished fitting a leather harness for Skrie to ride on Malusk's shoulder and obtained the rest of his armour. They spent their last day in town at the inn, preparing to depart for their next adventure.
What will happen next?
The next chapter is yet to be published.
I can assure you, the story doesn't end here. The end is far away from here.
Another part remains that will be full of suspense.
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Review of Kidnapped  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting chapter of this adventure fiction.
Skrie, enjoying a peaceful morning at the inn, observed the usual guests as they prepared for breakfast. She also wanted to join there. Skrie noted, a lot of conversations took place among the locals and miners. However, her attention was drawn to a peculiar situation when Malusk went. Was he missing with a half-elf woman, leaving behind warm but untouched food? Skrie embarked on a hunt for the missing pair, only to encounter an ambush while tracking them. With the help of her companions, Skrie managed to rescue Malusk and uncover the truth behind the mysterious woman's actions. The group found themselves in possession of a waggon filled with supplies intended for the fort, prompting them to return it to Fort Bridale. There, they discovered a surprising turn of events involving Sergeant Goston and the two merchant guards. As they navigated through the day's challenges, Skrie maintained a vigilant eye on their surroundings and potential threats.
What will happen next?
Can you predict anything?
I don't.
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Review of She Lives  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a fantastic criticism where Blanca, a Samaritan woman with a troubled past, chose to live a meaningful life. So, she had to face ridicule and physical violence from other women in her town. Despite her emotional wounds and the burdens of her past, including a father who struggled with alcoholism and anger, Blanca yearned for love and acceptance. One day, while drawing water at Jacob's well, she encountered Jesus, a Jew, who offered her living water that would quench her spiritual thirst for eternity. Initially sceptical, Blanca engaged in a conversation with Jesus, who revealed her unmet needs and desires through her failed relationships. Realising that her search for love and fulfilment had led her astray, Blanca humbly accepted Jesus as the Messiah and embraced the eternal life He offered. She ran to her village, sharing her encounter with Jesus and leading many to believe in Him as well. Through her testimony and the transformation in her life, others saw the unconditional love and grace of Jesus. Blanca's encounter with the Saviour not only changed her life but also brought salvation to many in her village who believed in Him. As she shared the good news of Jesus with others, they too experienced a deep sense of unconditional love and acceptance, understanding that true fulfilment and eternal life could only be found in Him. The harvest of faith continued to grow in the village as more people turned to Jesus and believed in Him as the Saviour of the world. Blanca's journey from brokenness to redemption serves as a powerful testament to the transformative power of encountering Jesus and embracing His offer of living water. Her story reminds us that no matter our past mistakes or struggles, true fulfilment and salvation can be found in Jesus alone.
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Review of ICEBERG  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How conscious and unconscious levels communicate while meditating.
Over a century ago, an iceberg brought the culmination of man's engineering skills and the elegance of the times to the bottom of the ocean. A replica of the Titanic is currently under construction and financed by Australian billionaire Clive Palmer. The Titanic will set sail from Liverpool to its destination, passing the Statue of Liberty and into New York Harbor. The iceberg, mothered by a glacier, has within itself a frightening and menacing reality. Ninety percent of its photogenic natural beauty lies beneath the surface of the sea, and as time passes, the underwater demon diminishes until it is the size of an ice cube. This iceberg serves as an illustration of the cleansing effects of reality meditation, which reveals both motive and truth. Reality meditation involves living with a meditative mind in daily life, watching, listening, learning, and understanding conflict at the moment of its development. Attention is the key to a subtle transformation during daily life, and this is the beginning of a mind coming into deeper meditation.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This novella contains an exciting story. It has constructed in an excellent way.
Maintenance man Harvey Allman at Vienna Gardens noticed strange occurrences, starting with malfunctioning lift six. Previous manager Ellis Whitmore had renovated five lifts but left lift six incomplete before his death. Harvey found blown fuses in the basement fuse box and heard billiard balls rolling without explanation. After making out-of-order signs for lift six, he heard lively party sounds on the vacant twelfth floor. The mysterious events left him unsettled, exploring the neglected complex and wondering about the eerie silence and vanished party.On March 15th, maintenance man Harvey Allman noticed elevator six at Vienna Gardens stop fifteen times in six months. The previous maintenance manager, Ellis Whitmore, had only completed five of the elevators, leaving the remaining employees, including Harvey, to finish the job. After checking all systems, he concluded that elevator six had been felled by a short circuit that tripped the emergency brake.
Harvey encountered residents, including the elderly Mrs. Pittman, a 90-year-old Holocaust survivor whose husband was a soldier who liberated the camp. Mrs. Pittman chuckled and continued on his way, feeling that she knew more about the complex than she let on.
Harvey entered the basement, where he found the lights coming on two by two, like marching ants. The basement was incredibly dusty and left shadows creeping around the objects contained within. The maintenance man continued to investigate the elevator problem, unsure if it started with the death of an actress in the 1920s.
How interesting the story is! I enjoy it very much.
Write on!
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Review of I remember...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Accidentally, today is another 9/11, when I am reviewing your writing. It is one of the black days in our civilisation.
The writer vividly recalled the morning of 9/11, when his usual routine was disrupted by that tragic event. Like many other people, sitting in front of the TV, he was witnessing the horrifying sight of the World Trade Centre tower being hit by a plane. The following days were filled with a mix of emotions, fears, sadness, anger, and a feeling of helplessness. It took a handful of times to get back to normalcy. The teller also struggled a lot to come to terms with the new reality of our vulnerability; self-reflection and prayer became my solace. The resumption of commercial flights brought a wave of fear and pride, especially for the family members, who became worried for them who were on a business trip.
We hope that those black days will never come back again.
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Review of Chasing Shadows  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting chapter of this adventure fiction.
Skrie suddenly found that the food brought to her room was laced with drugs. Dayne, the barman, was shocked too much and promised to investigate the matter seriously. Skrie disguised herself and saw a suspicious figure in the common room who was climbing into a merchant's wagon. She understood the urgency and found incriminating posters and overheard guards discussing a supply mission.
The next day, Skrie investigated furthermore and discovered that a half-elf woman was involved in the plot. She sent a message to Sgt. Stiles about it. Dayne helped her deliver the message. The sergeant responded, saying he would keep an eye on the situation.
What will happen next?
Is there any life risk involved?
What do you think?
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another interesting chapter of this adventure fiction.
Now Malusk is the indivisible part of the Skrie's team. So he shared his backstory with the group. Once he was a member of a bandit horde led by Grag Muct and later as part of Uncle Roland Grissot's company, the Blackhand Raiders. He also explained how he was betrayed and left for dead during an attack on his camp, which made him seek refuge at Fort Bridale.
Despite his dark past, Malusk expressed his suspicions about being framed and hunted, seeking the group's support in solving the mystery. He intimated his gratitude to Skrie, Garrick, and Theren, who stood by him despite the danger. However, their camaraderie was soon tested when tainted stew was delivered to their suite, causing them to suspect foul play and take action to investigate the source. As tensions rose, the group remained vigilant, ready to face any new challenges that came their way and determined to uncover the truth behind the threats they faced.
What will be in the next part?Can you predict? I can't.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a logical report especially on Generation Y's declining social skills and what we can do to fix it!
In a decisive battle between logic and theory, Sherlock Holmes and James Moriarty faced off, challenging each other's strengths, weaknesses, and every factor that defined them. This war of wisdom mirrored the internal struggles of a college student who hesitated to greet a classmate at breakfast, fearing potential awkwardness. The student eventually took a social risk and found success, leading to regular conversations with the classmate. Both individuals had engaged in internal battles of logic and social hypotheses, debating the potential outcomes of a simple greeting. In today's technology-driven society, where communication often lacks personal interaction, raw social skills are diminishing. The generation raised on impersonal communication methods must reflect on the importance of face-to-face interaction and the value of genuine social connections. As we navigate social encounters, it's crucial to set aside our devices and engage in meaningful conversations, as true social skills and connections are essential for personal growth and well-being. Instead of engaging in mental battles of logic and assumptions, we should embrace genuine interactions and strive to build authentic relationships with others.
It is a fantastic article for fixing up our problems.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This thesis is nothing but an introspective look at the body of Christ and healthy spiritual perspectives. This is the need of the hour.

A guilty conscience is evident in the church through people's refusal to acknowledge sin as rebellion against God. Socioeconomic conditions may influence opportunities in education, but the true determining factors are educators and their motivation. A teacher's self-assessment can impact students.

The responsibility of the church is to promote honour and humility towards God, leading others to Christ through one's own experience. Scripture guides behaviour to establish a Spirit-filled life.

Sin blinds individuals from understanding God's charge against them. Being indoctrinated in earthly paradigms can blind one to the teachings of the true God. God uses various institutions to educate us against sin.

We must not be blind to sin in our lives. Fear tactics do not work on those who do not know God. Every person has the opportunity to know God, regardless of past sins. Christians must recognise their advantage in knowing God and extend that opportunity to others. Paul emphasises that all have sinned and fall short of God's glory, making humility and acceptance of God's grace essential. Being spiritually ignorant is a result of sinfulness and opposition to God, not the other way around. Therefore, Christians must reflect on their own sins and extend grace to others.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Most probably, it will be a great novel. At least the first chapter suggests so. Undoubtedly, the main character of the story is none other than this unfortunate man. Some options of sidestories and substories have already been created. They are the unseparable parts of an ideal novel.
We all know that God creates us for a certain purpose to fulfil. This man born with darkness in his heart, consumed by rage and longing for normalcy, pleaded with the cosmos to end his torment. Failing to turn down his darkness, he vowed to defend the weak and fight evil as a silent guardian in the shadows. This is the purpose of God. He created the man to fight against evil powers. He decided to protect the innocent vengeance against evildoers.

It is the beginning of a thriller. It will be interesting.
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Review of Autumn Reverence  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's a great nonfiction. Undoubtedly, it's a personal essay on a memorable Halloween from my childhood in Indiana.
In late autumn, with Halloween approaching, a young girl felt isolated due to her brother and dad being away at basic training. Undoubtedly, it is a big issue all around the world.

Despite not being close with her Girl Scout troop mates, she found solace in the annual Connor Prairie Fall Festival. The Halloween night included tarot readings, special effects, and a thrilling Haunted Hay ride, but was bittersweet as she missed her brother's presence. The night took a tragic turn as she learnt about her dog Max's passing away after being hit by a car, leaving her heartbroken.

Returning home, she grieved Max's loss and regretted not being there for him. Finding comfort in her family, especially her compassionate grandfather, she also experienced her first period, adding to her emotional turmoil. Despite the challenges, she held on to memories of Max and the love they shared, learning to find solace in moments of connection amid solitude.
It's a tragic but classic end.
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Review of Return to Suncall  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie and her team are, again, facing another tough challenge in this chapter of the adventure fiction.The group survived an encounter with cultists in a village, saving the villagers and their children. They were thanked by the sheriff and lieutenant for their heroism. They decided to head back to Suncall, encountering wolves along the way. Upon reaching Suncall, they made preparations for their return, including obtaining supplies and lodging. However, they were alerted to a bounty poster with a resemblance to Malusk, prompting concerns about their safety. To avoid detection, Malusk got a face shield added to his helmet and considered it a disguise. They settled in at the First Place Inn, noticing a merchant's waggon and encountering Sgt. Goston. They secured a private suite at the inn for a few days, with meals included. Overall, they were both relieved to be back in Suncall and wary of potential threats following their recent adventures.
What will happen next?
Can you predict that? I can't.
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Review of The Lady of Light  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Skrie and her team are, again, facing another tough challenge in this chapter of the adventure fiction.
In a rush, Malusk led the party into a tomb, where they were attacked by a priestess and her spider. They managed to colocate an artefact that opened a door to a ghost called Rea'Las'Uh, who vowed to protect the ruins and gifted them with items to protect against evil. As they left the tomb, they discovered the village was on fire.
The party learnt that the new items had protective spells against evil, each with a different activation chant. Malusk activated the shield with the phrase 'Protect me from evil.' Theren activated the belt with 'Guard me from evil,' and Skrie's bracers already fit her with the protection phrase 'No evil shall touch me.' The tore was worn by the elf with its incantation.
During their recovery, they investigated the village's fires and noticed scattered campfires around the village. The group attempted to rest in preparation for their next journey.
What will happen next?
Can you have any sort of assumption?
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another exciting chapter of this adventure fiction.
Skrie and her team chose to return to the room with those bones. They found a dead cultist on the way and realized that the sarcophagus with a statue resembled the ghost. Skrie had that seen before. So they decided to return the items from the box to this location. After navigating a hidden tunnel, they emerged in a ruined mausoleum and witnessed a confrontation between the Drow and the High Priest. Skrie and her team had faced a battle. As they came with those.At that time, a voice came from the darkness to warn those people. They could rescue from that trap with ancient devices, but it's a narrow escape.
What will happen next?
Do you predict anything? But I don't.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is another exciting chapter of this adventure fiction. Skrie and her team now in a rabbit hole.
The collapsed stairway led to catacombs below, where the party encountered traps and undead creatures. They devised a plan to defend themselves against approaching cultists, using oil and fire to their advantage. Exploring further, they discovered unique undead creatures and mysterious poisonous substances. The party encountered challenges but managed to overcome them together, showcasing their resourcefulness and teamwork in the face of danger. The adventure continued as they uncovered more secrets and dangers lurking in the underground tunnels.
But, what will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
From the outline of the action-packed mystery is a perfect thriller, full of suspense. The main character of the story is Amy, a single mom of three kids, Bree, Joy, and Michael, living in Salt Lake City, Utah.
The day began in a typical morning routine for Amy. As school was going to start, Amy prepared her kids. Bree was reluctant to go to school without her mom, who was her rock since their dad had left. Despite a flat tire on the way to work, Amy was saved by a kind stranger named Lakota, who offered her a ride. He even asked her out on a dinner date, surprising Amy. After a successful day at work, Amy received flowers and a note from Lakota, igniting excitement in her life. She shared the news with her best friend Martha, who immediately planned a shopping spree to prepare Amy for her date. Despite Amy's reluctance, Martha insisted, determined to make her friend feel like a beauty queen. The story ended with Amy reluctantly agreeing to the shopping spree. It set the stage for a new chapter in her life filled with surprises and possibilities.
It's a very positive and efficient end.
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Review of A Word  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What can the words do? This is the subject of the thesis, which is very fascinating and relevant.
Can words just be as harmful as sticks and stones? Or these have other works to do!
This site serves various purposes, from entertainment to education, but it can also be a disappointing experience. The system, driven by money, favours paid members, leaving others feeling excluded. Despite this, we share our stories to show that we are more than just our experiences. Some users, like me, face issues with disabled features and deleted emails without explanation. Attempts to access the site from different IP addresses reveal font restrictions, making it difficult to read. Even long-term users are not immune, as a friend with a 3-year account was inexplicably deleted. This cautionary tale highlights the unpredictable nature of site administration and serves as a warning for others facing similar frustrations.
Undoubtedly, this thesis raises a vital issue.
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