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Review by Mr. E. Nigma
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great idea and good work!I loved the book by R.L.Stine and you did a good job making a continuation!I did think that Stine could have done more with his book,and you put them into motion.However,I have a few questions.First,why is it that whenever someone writes a shrink or growth story,not just here but EVERYWHERE,are the transformations always so fast?I mean I have seen many stories where the character is one inch,or 50 feet tall in the first chapter!I've seen where slow groth is a choice,but that is always either not used or just means that it will happen all at once later.I'd do it myself but I have trouble coming up with stories,I get a good main idea,but not much after that.Which relates to my next question.I'm thinking of starting a type of continuation to this story,if thats okay with you,in wich the purple peanut butter has a speacial ingridient created by a wizard wich causes those who eat it to shrink,and makes it purple.This wizard needs help and calls to the peanut butter and its wielder.It will also be revieled that there are other mixtures with speacial abilities,different foods with different colors and effects.They and their wielders have also been called.I just wanted to know what you think of the idea,and if you might add on due to my lack of the ability to add many details.I'd really appriciate a response,thank you!
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