amifigure's (amifigure) Reviews

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#2583636

Review of Broken

Review by amifigure

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like this poem..

I did feel that you could have elaberated alittle, like..

WHY do you think you are broken?
How do you feel about it?
Why is fixing so unattainable?

but all in all, I liked it..Good Job!

_____________________Ami~

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#1978889

Review of Bad Luck Frankie

Review by amifigure

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Aaaahhh, Hello!

I found that very disturbing, but somewhat funny..

It kept my intterest through to the end, and it did flow quite nicely. You are very (although I wanted to say 'grotesquely') imaginative. I can't think of why you would imagine that up??

But I do think it is kinda cool, and am glad that you had nerve to share!!

Write on!!!!

-Amifigure

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#1960251

Review of Skin

Review by amifigure

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Very excellent mixture of ideas...

I think you have a fine writing talent...

Write on!!!

-Amifigure

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#1960247

Review of Cause & Effect

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Very pretty poem!!

I enjoyed reading it!!

Hope to see more..

-Amifigure

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#1960242

Review of A Thousand Pieces

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I thought that poem was lovely...

So many unanswered questions,

So many thrown feelings and thoughts...

So much sorrow,

So much beauty in sadness.

Good job!!

-Amifigure

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#1956456

Review of my day

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Rated: E

| (1.0)

Good!!!

-Amifigure

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#1956409

Review of A Lesson In Dignity

Review by amifigure

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hello phoenix!!

I think you have a very good nack for writting, just by the way this peice flowed nicely..

I would be interrest in reading more that you have to write in the future, and though this peice had pride and stange greatness in it...I feel that it is either missing something, or maybe not complete...maybe try to develope this more??

But, all in all, I think this is very brillient.

Congratulations!!

-Amifigure

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#1939249

Review of Forever starts now

Review by amifigure

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I thought you wrote that very well,

And the poem was very pretty, even alittle sad.

But it's a good thing that love will come around again, just be patient..in fact it will probably be better the next time around..( it usually is..)

But anyway, I thought it was great!!!
Keep on writting!!!

And please, review one of mine!!
(but be aware that mine are alittle
self-loathing)

Good work!!!

-Amifigure