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Review by Annabelle Flint
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very lovely descriptive piece.
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Review of Melancholy  
Review by Annabelle Flint
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was an excellent piece well done.
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Review by Annabelle Flint
Rated: E | (4.0)
I appreciate the plot line that i can see so far though try using I more often. It gives, in my opinion, more of a sense of first person narration. 'i checked the USB drive' gives more of a personalized feel to the statement opposed to 'checked the USB drive'. other than that the plot sounds great.
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