Hello everyone, I'll just give you a little intro to my stuff, since I'm new to .com. The chapter(s) below is part of my first book that I have written, titled Evermoore-The Ancients Way. It is the first book of three I will be writing, and I would appreciate any critiques I can get. I have not sent it out to an agent yet because I want some feedback and to see if there are parts I should tweak or change. So, read and enjoy, and don't forget to tell me if you like it or not.