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this is a new book i am workin on, i am a noob writer so let me know what u think.
The world.... has been in harmony for 7 years, the day the demons attacked is not one which anyone will forget so easily. In the city of Krion the biggest ninja capitol in the world, is where it happend. it was a normal day and they were having a special tournament in the B.A.O. stadium. As the fans cheered they halted and gasped, the sky started to breaking and glass fell onto there heads.... They sent a ninja fighting force to check it out, Seth's team rushed onto the stadium roof and saw what was really going on. Giant black hands were clawing through the sky and sending lighting out of there fingers.

Seth lightly smirked as he brushed his silver hair with his sword...... He then began to scream as loud as he could, he sword turning red he hurled it at the sky watching it bounce of one of the horrid hands........ " Gah! what the hell!? that should've cut the damn thing off!" he gritted his teeth and orederd his men to lunge at the hands...... But he stopped and just looked down and smirked, when his men asked him what was wrong he just said they were too late.......

The demons had fully emerged filling up the whole sky with most of there upper torso... Seth looked up at it and could not believe it..... these were the Khronos he had heard so much about.

*on the other side of town* A young boy age thirteen, ran down the streets looking for his dad... Afteer running around for more then a couple of blocks he tripped and just lay there. " dad where are you!?" he screamed attracting one of the demons... it lifted its foot and smirked, it would taste blood right away....... As it brought it down his foot hit rocks and seth held the boy standing on a roof top twenty feet away. " I got ya kid...." he said giving him a light smile. The kid replied that his name was saoir and wanted to know what the hell was going on.

Seth just nodded and said he wanted to know the same thing. The demon that tried to kill saoir spotted them and teleported over there. " Smash!!!!!!!" it cried as it raised its fist and brought it down. Seth dodged but was still close enough to see the roof shatter and almost hit him. Seth vanished reappearing by his team, to see that two out of six of them were dead. One of the team mates showed him a scroll and told him a plan that could work...... Saoir over heard this and gulped hard. "I will do the fusion....." he said slowly almost eating his tongue.

Seth gritted his teeth and looked at the situation....... they needed someone young for it to work so he would have to do it. he told saoir to stand still and try not to scream...... The demons kept thrashing down building and houses, stepping on and eating peasants and low level ninja......

*Three minutes later*
A large dragon walking on to legs walked towards the demons with no fear.... and had a big smirk on his snout. He opened his mouth wide and shot out white flames which ripped away one of the demons skin revealing black and green blood. he then started to glow blue and teleported all around town killing the demons and drinking there blood...... After the dust settled, the dragon stood there laughing.... and turned to face seth and his crew.

He lunged at them but seth thrusted his hand s forward and started to chant a sealing technique.. before the dragon could eat him whole, saoir reappeared with a small dragon tatoo on his chest which then quickly faded.... seth wiped his forhead and sighed....... "its all..... your falt......falt....falt.....falt......" he spoke to saoir.

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