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Polka Dots and Sunshine Teardrops  [13+]
a child with a disability, a mouse in polka dots, and the kindness of strangers
by foxtale
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

A warm and enjoyable personal story, written to share a lesson learned about love and kindness. We see the author in a moody state, pressed to go to Disneyland with the family when perhaps his means were not up to it, tired and jaded, when something happens which gives him a fresh perspective on life.

The descriptions are bright and clear, and I could easily visualize the scenes in my mind as I read. Your characters are distinct and unique in their humanity, and we find ourselves smiling and even getting a little teary-eyed as we finish with a renewed hope in the goodness of others. Everyone did their part to make the disabled boy’s day truly magical, from the Minnie Mouse girl to the two friendly customers pushing tables out of the way so he could meet her.

I have often heard of and seen such moments at Disney and with other dressed up characters, on social media; we can’t help admiring the patience and kindheartedness they have as they strive daily to make others happy in what must be a tiresome job role.

I see only one typo from the entire item, where you’ve spelled “sites” instead of “sights.” Otherwise, this was excellently written, with great, easy to read formatting. I enjoyed reading it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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