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Review #4755991
Viewing a review of:
Everyday Canvas   [18+]
Second blog -- answers to an ocean of prompts
by Joy
         Review for entry/chapter: "Lucky Me!
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



Hello, Joy!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* You did a great job with the prompt for this blog post.

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this blog post of yours sometime in the past and loved it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "June" file. *Smile* ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

*Bulleto* Every time I read your blog, it seems we have more and more in common. *Smile* I also "try to avoid thinking about about the worst part of anything, unless that thing needs extra and instant attention." I'd much rather focus on the positive or positive things I can do to make things better.

*Bulleto* Except for certain blood tests that require it for accurate results, like lipid panels and glucose screening, I don't understand why they always want people to fast either. You make a good point about safety too. It's much safer to drive when not starving and when fully awake. I'm so glad your son was able to drive you and that all went well for that undertaking. I hope your results were favorable.

*Bulleto* I loved that you "did enjoy the passenger seat much more than I ever did the driver's seat. Lucky me!" I also loved that you ended your post with the post's title. Clever and fun way to end things!

*Bulleto* I loved the ending, as you probably guessed from my last statement. *Smile*

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your personal experience blog post.

*Bulleto* I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this personal experience blog post of yours and the whole blog in general.

*Bulleto* Congratulations on the awardicons you have received for your wonderful blog!

*Bulleto* I love the thumbnail image you are using for this blog.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done! *Clap*


CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a personable and engaging writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your prompted personal blog post.

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experience, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


*Bulletv* Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler





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