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 The Four Elements.  [E]
In the dance of elements, primal and old, Fire, Earth, Water, and Air unfold.
by Novice Mage
Review by Monty
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I love this poem, read it twice for my enjoyment. Never read a better poem on the elements. The story of what they do told in well chosen lines of rhyme. Each stanza devoted to only that element. The rhythm is fine and gives imagery to every line. You capped it with that final stanza. Thank you for sharing.
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