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 | Online paid survey  [E] I am a content writer. This is my first brief writing.  |
  This is a "Game of Thrones" review!Hello, NH Bhatti  Overall Impression:This is the first time I've seen an article on this topic on WdC, so it was a pleasant surprise to find it. Title and Description: If this is a content brief, I'd suggest a snappier title. Right now, it looks like you've put a survey in your port or are trying to sell us something. It's great that you're working as a content writer, and you're right; it can be lucrative for people looking to really hustle. In terms of the description, though, you'll want something that attracts the reader to look at your work. Providing information that tells the reader what the brief is about (instead of telling them it's your first brief) might get you more readers. Content and Flow:The content is good. It flows well and appears accurate. The writing is a bit formal, but if that's what the client requested, that's what you'd provide. Grammar and Mechanics:Formatting for the web requires some changes from typical publishing. Double spacing between paragraphs is critical for readability. While not all platforms adhere to this, it dramatically affects how writing is received. If something looks like a solid wall of text, they'll most likely click away. From what I can tell, you haven't indented your paragraphs, and that's a good thing. Keeping the left-hand side flush also keeps readability high. I see you've had some trouble with the site's code, WritingML. If you remove the space after the colon, your formatting will be the way you want it to be. wML takes a bit of getting used to, so it's not a big deal. Once you get the hang of it, it'll be smooth sailing. Final Thoughts:Thank you for providing the article, and I wish you well in your content writing endeavors! Thank you for sharing your work with us! Jayne   My approach to reviews: "I'll Explain, but not Disclaim" The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and, therefore, do not necessarily reflect the group, activity, and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.
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