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 The Well  [13+]
A ghost story in the form of a poem
by Johnny Foxx
Review of The Well  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Well, this is a short, and spooky story. One night, a man goes crazy, and kills his family with an axe. He then throws the remains down into a well. He shows no remorse for his deeds, even after he's sentenced to the chair. But now there's a question, for it seems that he cursed his victims. Now one must stay away, especially on certain nights, when the sound of chopping is heard.

Characters
The characters seem to be very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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