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I am Lucky  [E]
Being thankful and feeling lucky all the time
by Grace Anne
Review of I am Lucky  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a lovely free-verse poem that tells us about the contributions of nature in our lives.
The poet draws a perfect image of nature. Except for the syllable structure and line number, every rule of traditional Japanese Haiku and Tanka is followed which gives a separate dimension to this poetry. The shadow of those two sensational Japanese forms piling in the same poem is not an easy task. But, the poet performs that with perfection.
How nature entertains the narrator is described here in a simple but pleasant manner. That simplicity touches the highest peak of poetic artistry. This is a rare quality which is adopted by the poet.
The author can express self-feeling nicely in a tune that gives the poem a smooth pace. A lot of efficiency and regular practice are needed for this ability.
A humble request to you...
Though you have written the poetry brilliantly, you need to concentrate hard on the selection of genres.
If we carefully read the poem, we will find the joyful relationship between the narrator and nature. So, first and foremost genre must be 'nature'. The second genre must be 'Relationship'.
You may ask why be the 'Relationship' not the first genre. If nature does not exist, how does the relationship build? So nature gets the first preference.
The genre chosen is art. I hope that you will show that art perfectly in the next writing effort.

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