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Wow! What a fantastic writing effort it is! It is an ideal narrative poetry. The narrator tries to construct a story. The number of characters are only two. One teller and her would-be husband. Their golden childhood is the prime subject. To explain those sweet memories, the narrator shares some memories brilliantly. The images are very childish and also very lively. We can show those scenes like a movie. This is the prime objective of the poetry. Though they are children, they very much love each other. The environment is completely romantic. They feel obsessed with one another. That is painted in a lovely and interesting manner. The poet touches the extreme level of poetic artistry.
There is no doubt that they attract each other. That type of story-based poetry we do not see regularly but that art is very attractive. The poet represents it with perfection. There is no doubt about it.
I can see your bright future in this community. We, the readers of this site, remain grateful you for the effort.
Keep writing.


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