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 She's a Thief  [E]
The audacity of a thief!
by Magoo
Review of She's a Thief  
Review by JACE
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


Hi Magoo .

I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "She's a Thief"  in honor of your WDC anniversary.

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Great job with your poem. I selected your offering because of your title. I had to know more.

I don't often review poetry, especially free form, as I usually don't understand it. I appreciate your use of rhyme and meter. It was easy to read. I also found your humor to be refreshing. Great ending; I didn't expect that.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I found no issues with the mechanics of your writing. Well done.    

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering, and I look forward to seeing you around in the coming year. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.

Reviewed by
JACE

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