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 Path  [E]
The path we take, is the journey that we create
by Kallie
Review of Path  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a very thoughtful poetry. In our childhood, our parents set a goal for us without considering whether we can reach the target or not. So our misery begins from here. It is truly a global burning issue nowadays.
The children start walking on a set path to achieve the target. The lanes of the journey are uneven. Therefore, every child faces a lot of unknown obstructions. Time flows at his pace. The children of yesterday become adults of the present but their sufferings continue. For the sake of their missions, they even sacrifice the little blisses that come in the way of their journey to the target. People do not consider whether it is suit for them or not. They only know that they have to fulfil their missions nothing else. So, the life becomes mechanical. This is the most pathetic incident. We, the people of the material world, run behind the goal aimlessly until the last breath takes place. With-itway, we misuse our lives.
Now it is the time for rectification. Otherwise, our future generations will encounter an unholy dark force. We do not want to see those days.
It is the biggest problem. It is not easy to combat but it is also not impossible. I hope that we will overcome this soon.
A lot of thanks to the poet for enlightening this crucial fact.



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