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 To Clean the World  [ASR]
Women, boundaries, and beyond all that
by Joy
Review by JACE
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Joy .

I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "To Clean the World" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I have a hard time reviewing free form poetry--perhaps I just need structure in my life. But I have to say, your offering was powerful for me, full of emotion and intensity.

Though you wrote this almost 20 years ago, I found it quite relevant today. Your opening set the stage with a unique look at how one should view the earth. Schools don't teach such a view. History is fraught with interactions between peoples over borders, real or imagined.

Each person who reads your offering will obviously project their own experience on it. I did.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* Nothing to report on here. Well done.    

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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