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NOT ANY ONE  [E]
A double-acrostic poem about love. (I can barely believe that this won)
by KnightScribe
Review of NOT ANY ONE  
Review by JACE
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


Hi KnightScribe .

I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "NOT ANY ONE"  in honor of your WDC anniversary. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression.Greetings. I selected your poem precisely because it was a double acrostic. I have written one of my own and know how difficult this form can be.

You stated that you can't believe it won--I assume it was a local WDC contest. It would be interesting to note the contest for which it placed. You might easily add a link at the bottom.

Speaking of placing a link, you might also add a note explaining the word "pragma." I didn't recognize it or its use in your poem. After looking it up and not being a programmer, I failed to see its relevance.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I noted no obvious mechanics errors in your offering.    

*Star* My Rating. 4.5 . 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering, and I look forward to seeing you around in the coming year. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.

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JACE

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