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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is another interesting chapter. Joey, Silvia and Joey come to the church where Kodesh resides. Being a holy soul, Sylvia can do some impossible to possible.
At last, Joseph begs Sylvia's hand in front of the rest of the devotees and Father Kodesh. But she trembled. Observing that the father announced that Sylvia comes to this planet with certain purposes. So she is an extraordinary soul and has a lot of work to do. So Kodesh requests Joseph not to disturb Sylvia for the sake of her work.
Why does Sylvia come into the world? Now, the purpose is cleared by the Kodesh. So everybody should help her to justify her talents. It is a clear and positive direction at the end of the chapter.
What will happen next? We can not predict the same. Therefore we are waiting for the incoming chapters.

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