Hi, strlcuckoo ,

I found this little gem of a poem by your own request and I am glad I did. A lovely romantic love poem, small, sweet and quiet. That's how I read it anyway.

The tale can be interpreted as a little bit sad, two lovers unaware of each other, apart from each other, reminiscing and feeling blue. But also you can read it as hopeful, they love each other and there is really no need for tears. Or perhaps happy ones, that would be good also.

There is a calmness in your writing that I really enjoy. The pace and rhythm are good, and there is some end rhyme.

One thing I noticed for your consideration: I would leave the word "for" in the end sentence of the first stanza. That way the candance won't be interrupted. But that's personal.

A very sweet nicely written poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024

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